| = here | Veronica Vãleanu [05.Sep.12 11:29] |
| please correct: [the photographer of dreams] [dreamfulness] instead of [dreaminess] -eliminate the comma after [so that] - [You yourself will be stuck there,/an image painted in green/on the lamps of the universal memory] instead of [You yourself will be An image stuck On the lamps painted green Of the universal memory. ] -[I get revolted] instead [i revolt] - [i want only...]or [I want nothing but] instead of [I want something else, Only...] | |
| = Poems/ poetry... | Sârb Olimpia [05.Sep.12 17:05] |
| Sometimes I have the feeling that YOU are the Poet of my poetry. I always rely on your wonderful sense of poetry, and I register disappointment in front of my own lack of balance and tools in expressing myself. Anyway, your advice is of much help, indeed. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. | |
| = . | Veronica Vãleanu [05.Sep.12 22:10] |
| Oh no, there is no need for you to say that! Please do not let disappointment put barriers between you and yourself, it would stop you from letting your inner voice listen to its own modulations. | |
| = Kindest Regards | Sârb Olimpia [07.Sep.12 14:55] |
| "Skill is the unified force of experience, intellect and passion in their operation." (John Ruskin)... I need to thank you for your patience in making me skillful. And I must say I always admire your talent in saying things without hurting author's feelings. | |