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 =  Some errors
Monica Hayes
[26.Oct.12 15:48]
Hi Vavila. There are some mistakes in your text, grammer ones especially (ex: "it" in the first verse should be removed! and "it's" is incorrect... only "it"). The poem itself is simple and rather romantic - cheesy. Keep working and try to understand how English flows :-)
Best regards,

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