| = typos... | Romulus Campan [20.Jan.13 21:36] |
| Hi there, Very interesting text, rather a philosophical thought than poetry, but leave it please as poetry. The real problems though are the several typos, so please do a thorough spell-check and repost. I'll gladly consider it after! Waiting... rc | |
| = issue | Bodiana [20.Jan.13 22:28] |
| I have a small problem, I feel better in classical poetry even though my work is not very good. When I start the free verse somehow I become philosofical. It is nonetheless an exercise. | |
| = still there... | Romulus Campan [20.Jan.13 22:25] |
| Still lots of typos... rc | |
| = choices... | Romulus Campan [20.Jan.13 22:34] |
| I do understand both your concern and your point of view. Nevertheless, I have to say that there's a significant qualitative difference in favour of your free verse text, which should encourage you to spend time in refining through more writing:-) Of course, the choice is yours, but it would be a loss not to try more free verse besides the classical ones:-) Just an "old man's" advice... rc | |
| = all done! | Romulus Campan [20.Jan.13 23:28] |
| Done! I particularly noticed "and an incredible long list sees the break of day.", an interesting, stern, nevertheless exquisite sentence... Changed "man" to "men" as required by "are". Hope you don't mind:-) We've had quite a good cooperation today, isn't it! I truly enjoyed it! Take care, rc | |
| = kindly | Bodiana [21.Jan.13 10:31] |
| I enjoyed it, too. I will make the correction. Kindly, gg. | |