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Corina Gina Papouis
[25.Nov.13 21:17]
I think for me the poem ended here:

"That day…is not today." (to be honest I have not read it to the end)

one other small correction: without the present (having) been roughly cut

hope this was useful!

Cheers!

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nica ioana
[28.Nov.13 22:20]
thanks.It did help:)




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