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 =  Hi Florentina
Corina Gina Papouis
[28.Nov.13 22:30]
Welcome to Agonia! :)
I believe your text is more of a personal nature, appears more like a blog story, which is not necessarily bad, it seems quite genuine, but more of a different kind of text we would post on a front page. Please revise it for now and check some of your grammar (i.e 'That we listen so many times' > That we listened to so many times)
try to get maybe the essence (give some/ leave some)of it and let's take it from there.

Kind regards!

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