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+ perfect diversion...
Romulus Campan
[05.Mar.14 15:22]
I decided to "star" this poem for its intriguing ideatic resemblance to a haiku...
Its minimalism is just an extreemly well designed diversion, as it seems to hide an untamed storm of an inner turmoil which wants its lightnings to be seen and thunders to be heard, without revealing the core.
One of your very best my friend...


 =  Thank you, Romulus
John Willy Kopperud
[05.Mar.14 17:50]
- for your lighting up a yellow star over my little piece on estrangement, tension and hostility!
Cheers from Willy

 =  puppets
raj thampi
[10.Mar.14 12:37]
How unfortunate!

"Wooden dolls do consequently
whistle while marching"

Certain times we are all puppets, marching (living) against the rules made by others/situations.

Beautiful John, just beautiful, I could feel myself in those two lines...

 =  Indeed, Raj
John Willy Kopperud
[10.Mar.14 16:08]
- soldiers,human or wooden, tend to be most unfortunate. Thank you for your response!
Cheers from Willy

 =  wooden dolls
[29.Jun.14 21:07]
I like it very much John Willy

"Wooden dolls do consequently
whistle while marching".

they lead the band onto the field. I felt as if I am the leaves of the wooden dolls!

 =  Mmmm..
John Willy Kopperud
[08.Jul.14 19:34]
-the leaves of the wooden dolls. Maybepinocchi is in the lead of this procession.
Thank you Gunsel!
Cheers from Willy

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