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Corina Gina Papouis
[28.Mar.14 15:58]
I guess I would have enjoyed this more in white verse. The rhyming is not consistent and the rhythm becomes slightly tiring after a while.

I loved the idea of love around the world! Love is what makes the world go round! :)
Cheers!

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= :)	Corina Gina Papouis [28.Mar.14 15:58]
I guess I would have enjoyed this more in white verse. The rhyming is not consistent and the rhythm becomes slightly tiring after a while. I loved the idea of love around the world! Love is what makes the world go round! :) Cheers!