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 =  is there more?
Motoc Lavinia
[06.Jun.14 10:38]
Now, that to me sounds interesting, catching, yet enigmatic. Is it the beginning of something unhappened?

+ very good
Corina Gina Papouis
[20.Jun.14 12:59]
captivating, mysterious, dark yet fluid and powerful.
love the ambiguity created and I would love to read more like this!

this part has its own league: "death is not as serious as life. You just swallow a knot in your throat from the corner of the star still left for you."


 =  thanks
Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
[20.Jun.14 18:15]
Thanks Lavinia, thanks Corina! My apologies for this belated answer. This prose poem is a whole by itself.

 =  I certainly enjoyed-
John Willy Kopperud
[08.Jul.14 19:30]
the imagery of this one. Thanks for sharing!
Cheers from Willy

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