| = I really like this poem. It is complex and I will be thinking and reading it ove | Eric Coursey [29.Jan.15 22:45] |
| This is very profound. One of my favorite parts was "how could I tear apart the veil...with such soft hands." I felt you were saying that trying to get across you the message of not being controlled by belief in beauty is impossible in a poem. | |
| = feelings | Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu [23.Jun.15 23:07] |
| belated thanks, Eric. I think your guess is correct. That is the most diaphanous part of my imagery. | |