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Corina Gina Papouis
I wish you could change the following as it doesn't sound right:
'diminishes in the top of the things'
it could be 'on top of things' or 'over things'
otherwise, a lovely poem!
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thank you so much with helping finding a better word for this verse. It is more than welcomed. I already change it, and definitely sounds better. Thank you for the journey you made here among all these pictures sewed in the morning cloth.