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Corina Gina Papouis
[20.Dec.17 23:43]
I kinda liked this poem for the way it toys with the inner you.
It's an old story but the rhyming is good and the words carefully chosen.
Although it has some nice images, the poem is too obvious. I'd love to see more of your depth as a writer.

Please write some more, let go, go deep - less filter.

Kind regards,

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