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 =  Syntax?
Hi Gabriel,

Very good text, just wondering if this is how you intended this part "she began to say softly as if was fondled me"? The syntax seems unusual to me...?
Please kindle double check.
I'm back editing, will check promptly.

rcm

 =  Hello
Gabriel Nicolae Mihăilă
[20.Jan.23 22:33]
Thank you. Hope the new form is more accurate and appropiate. Wish you a great day!




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