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 =  Deserves more attention
Elena Daniela, I have revisited your submission, and I suggest a revision of syntax, after which the text could be accepted as a main display.
For example, "I asked the skylark, enlighten bird ..." requires a rendering of "enlighten" in its past tense form, "enlightened", in accordance with the original; and there a more similar.

rcm




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