| = remarkable *** | Edilberto González Trejos [04.Oct.05 04:27] |
| Remarkable poem, Irina, intense and full of images, neatly crafted, no word-excess. If I was a manager, I would give you a Star! I don`t know how I related "rain" and "acid jazz" with some inner acid rain like acid tears... There`s music, texture, colours but also darkness. Cheers, SONGO | |
| = Intense Composition | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [04.Oct.05 04:51] |
| Your words has life as if it explodes and excels, concealing such tremendous power that makes it alluring to the readers, as of Edilberto González Trejos said it deserves better! | |
| + star | Diana Pacuraru [04.Oct.05 23:49] |
| i shall give you a star because you deserve, this text is indeed full of that kind of pallor that brings the reader to such a state...at least it brought me...the last few words are just so well put there. yes, i like reading good poems and i'm glad i found something here, something i could remain with after i log off. | |