| = Beethoven misplaced | andreea l. [28.Nov.05 16:03] |
| you will never find a still sunset in any of Beethoven's works. ever. Bach has nothing to do with cobwebs. your poem is too quiet, too delicate and too dull to include Beethoven. i know perfectly well that you intended to "dress" this poem in a sort of antique aura, but trust me... Beethoven does not fit. just play one of Beethoven's piano works, that's all it takes in order to have the world's simplicity sussed out. | |
| = oh please | andreea l. [29.Nov.05 14:15] |
| you must be kiddin' me. :))))))))))))))))))))) have i ever listened to Beethoven's 9th symphony? have i ever... :)))))))))))))))))))) you are absolutely hilarious. what i wanted to prove you, songo, is that your subjecive considerations about poetry are equal to nought, and not only your considerations, anybody's. true poetry isn't found in a rough pattern. it has no technique, it cannot be manoeuvered. it exists. it's as simple as that. remember what dan said. well, i must admit that he's absolutely right. all my comments on Beethoven in relation to your poem ... neah, why take the bother? | |
| = valuable & enlightening feedback | Edilberto González Trejos [29.Nov.05 23:53] |
| I see your point. I appreciate your feedback. Take care, EDILBERTO | |
| = music on graduating bach | Akira Sendoh [08.Dec.05 04:07] |
| Waving spider web, i really don't know but i imagined of a march, a recognition march nor graduation march, my keen is not that specific and precise but it opens my mind towards the image where i graduated while marching on the isle with toga/graduating suit! | |
| = Nice additions, Akira | Edilberto González Trejos [08.Dec.05 15:43] |
| Hi AKIRA, Your comm. enriches the text. never really thought of a graduation, but it is an open creation to be fed with the readers` views. Thanks a lot for passing by and reading Truly, SONGO | |