| = these are just my opinion, at least! | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [04.Dec.05 07:53] |
| Isn't better if you'll change those lines saying so near and so far away, into *(so near yet so far)*? and so as the title. You can change it if you want to.! | |
| = Nothing.. | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [04.Dec.05 08:27] |
| (*So near yet so far away*) any way just forget about it..! | |
| = done:) | Hanna Segal [06.Dec.05 04:23] |
| thanks for the input, Josh, it was greatly appreciated | |
| = muslim ruby | felix nicolau [21.Apr.06 14:22] |
| I think it is better not having changed it. This way is closer to a sapiential saying. ANd I see it in close connection with the above essay, actually like a motto to that named essay. But I also highly praise your sheer artistical simplicity. | |