| = The frigid feeling | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [16.Dec.05 15:33] |
| I like this one, the plague of winter, the coldness where you're trapped, like a wondering soul, over and so on.. | |
| = powerful last line | Edilberto González Trejos [31.Dec.05 03:53] |
| The title is also a powerful last line to conclude and solve these nice verses of yours... I find it remarkable SONGO | |
| = To Joshua Vasquez Butawan and Edilberto González Trejos | Lie Marian [12.Jan.06 12:57] |
| This is one of the few poems that I wrote and after a few days I still like .Thank you for your thoughts. | |