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 =  sound of the poetry downstairs...
Marius Surleac
[03.Jun.08 15:06]
Soft, clever, elegant, peaceful. Beautiful poem. The second stanza is very expressive and visual.


 =  My opinion about this poem is just about the same...
John Willy Kopperud
[04.Jun.08 11:07] Marius expresses. I must add this to Luminita:
as if in a Sunday is not a valid way of writing in English.
At present I can think of two valid options:
As if it were Sunday
or; As if on a Sunday.
Cheers from Willy

+ beautiness, sharpness
Luminita, great translation, for I see music in Marinela`s verses in English.
Powerful verses, plenty of beauty and reflecting a sharp mind

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