| = sound of the poetry downstairs...|
|Soft, clever, elegant, peaceful. Beautiful poem. The second stanza is very expressive and visual.|
| = My opinion about this poem is just about the same...|
John Willy Kopperud
|...as Marius expresses. I must add this to Luminita:|
as if in a Sunday is not a valid way of writing in English.
At present I can think of two valid options:
As if it were Sunday
or; As if on a Sunday.
Cheers from Willy
|+ beautiness, sharpness|
Edilberto González Trejos
|Luminita, great translation, for I see music in Marinela`s verses in English.|
Powerful verses, plenty of beauty and reflecting a sharp mind