| = Nice one you got here! | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [26.Dec.05 13:14] |
| I like this! The different figures of thoughts, they all differ from each other yet lurks in one route, emotions can be reconstructed even if you're old enough. | |
| = Joshua | ion amariutei [29.Dec.05 17:50] |
| thanks, Joshua, i've tried to write about emotion in a completely emotionless manner, hence the title :) | |
| = oh yes please. | katie [19.Jan.06 03:33] |
| don't know much else to say besides: i'm totally into this. seriously. | |
| = Emotional recycle bin | Miriam Cihodariu [31.Jan.06 14:47] |
| It gives hope in a detached and funny matter. I like the first emotion the best, although they are all complementary. I especially like the ending, and the "yo"- it gives a deep feeling of humour in the solitude of death, in a very modern way. It kind of reminds me of Marin Sorescu's style of facing his demons. Really beautiful. I remember you giving me some very useful suggestions on translating a poem by Nichita Stanescu and one of mine, some time ago. I'll keep reading you. Miriam. | |
| = katie, Miriam | ion amariutei [01.Feb.06 20:25] |
| thanks for the visit and kind words! | |
| = Skinless emotions | Edilberto González Trejos [18.Feb.06 15:40] |
| "the thought between thoughts says - shut up and listen: can you hear any emotion?" Then the Demiurge arrives and questions every thought, leaving faintly visible those skinless emotions. Cheers Poet SONGO | |
| = plugging and plugging | felix nicolau [12.Apr.06 14:32] |
| sapiential poetry,but really what do you figured out by the title? Now considering the exquisite end of your creation i could venture to say that you envisaged the reshaping of man on emotional stones | |
| = SONGO, felix | ion amariutei [14.May.06 06:09] |
| cheers, SONGO, may the words light your emotions... errr... or the other way around :) felix, as the saying goes, if you've got to explain it is probably bad :) you might be right, i didn't realize that emotion here is associated first with stone/statue then with skeleton/bones. both kind of mineral, remnants of living emotions/thoughts/beings | |
| = True for a true poem! | Marius Surleac [14.Feb.08 14:35] |
| Wow!!! I like it, excellent and it has a little bit from Nichita Danilov's poetry. Is powerful by its contrast images … and smart. Congratulations!!! | |
| = decentralised anoesis | Veronica Valeanu [22.Jan.09 14:09] |
| you purged that emotion, you made it sublime and from there further on to decentralised anoesis. | |