= (A+) | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [02.Jan.06 09:57] |
Wow, this one is really great, for me! I liked it so much, if i were Pandora’s box, don’t you know what i’d keep inside? ------------------------------------ U just gotta know that deep inside of me I feel the same way for you! I'll give it a very inspiring verdict, keep it up! "Here is the applause"(***)! I'll keep an eye on ur other texts! | |
= sheer doubt | felix nicolau [14.Apr.06 02:28] |
beautiful, innovating images,similes and metaphors. I also appreciate your shoot-to-thrill way of thinking.The last stanza,I like it and don't.How is this possible | |