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 =  Sudden ending
Josh Bourget
[05.Jan.06 00:40]
The last stanza of this particular text of mine is a sudden change from the uniformity and flow of the rest of the peom, because of the contrast of the orange to the priceless gifts. On orange is only something seen everyday, so it cannot distract from her beauty the way that the other gifts would.

 =  senseless
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[08.Jan.06 08:27]
hey, this question might come up silly, You're kinda familiar! aren't you Red Thomas Maulion??

 =  who?
Josh Bourget
[19.Jan.06 03:30]
Sorry, but I've never heard that name before.




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