| = the ruined house|
|this haiku was written under the inspiration of an old house which I saw in one of my journeys to the country... I hope I managed to discover the real pasion in that ruin...|
| = Reveal by hiding|
Alina Maria Bica
this is not poetry. I cannot find anzthing poetic in this text. If you want to reveal the passion in a ruin, don`t say exactly what you saw. Try to reveal by hiding. This is only an opinion because I want to be of use....
| = a haiku... not ideas...|
|A Haiku is a poem without methapors... Without hidden senses... You reveal an image, that's all|