= overhelming | ioana barac grigore [16.Apr.06 18:38] |
merci beaucoup, felix a bientot (pour le bon ton) | |
+ an eye for an eye | ion amariutei [22.Apr.06 04:09] |
the wise nagarasi squinted until just a little beam of light was getting through his eyelids. what's life but a little furry light - he said. apprentices were still staring as the day turned into dusk. one by one, he slapped them by the head and spoke again: yo, dinner time! i would have liked the image and words a little closer in meaning. sort of building a visual metaphor, complementing the poem. but looks nice anyway | |
= not too late, i hope | ioana barac grigore [02.Jun.06 22:54] |
i like it, ion. thanks a lot. mine, was an old one... | |