| = Hair | Monica Hayes [14.Jun.07 18:13] |
| I loved it mostly because of the powerful image that you created in just a few words. Reminded me of some movies , I’ve seen a long time ago. Thanks for your comment. | |
| = hitchy | felix nicolau [15.Jun.07 11:54] |
| hitchhiking along the poetic country, fighting the tempests and gallows, sometimes you run into jewellries like this. life gets a meaning. i liked the modern suggestion of this withcraft | |
| + der stern | felix nicolau [15.Jun.07 11:56] |
| i forgot smth | |
| = Felix! I wish you a most pleasant weekend! | John Willy Kopperud [16.Jun.07 08:13] |
Thank you so much, Felix! In one of the comments to your poem MARRAKECH you were chided for delivering such a "terrible hippie image." That comment struck me as being pretty stupid. My subtitle "Ancient Hippie Lore" feels like sweet revenge on your behalf. | |
| = Enjoy your weekend, Monica! | John Willy Kopperud [16.Jun.07 08:21] |
Thank you for perceiving my imagery as effective! Also it's quite nice to set off associations to movies people have seen. Greetings from Oslo | |
| = sweet revenge | felix nicolau [18.Jun.07 15:34] |
| thanks for avenging me, Willy! and i only try to keep the pace with your imagination! | |
| = Oku | Edilberto González Trejos [18.Jun.07 16:00] |
| The road of OKU is silence taking us higher Cheers SONGO | |
| = Bashô? | John Willy Kopperud [19.Jun.07 09:04] |
Edilberto, thank you again. Are you referring to Oku no Hosomichi by the poet Bashô? | |
| = More to come | John Willy Kopperud [19.Jun.07 09:07] |
Felix! Thanks again! More haikus are to come. At the moment it is the transition of the genre to modern times and non-oriental settings that intrigue me most. | |
| = Matsuo Basho | Edilberto González Trejos [19.Jun.07 14:31] |
| yes Willy, it´s the book from BASHO, translated into Spanish by OCTAVIO PAZ in 1956 Cheers SONGO | |