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 =  Hair
Monica Hayes
[14.Jun.07 18:13]
I loved it mostly because of the powerful image that you created in just a few words.
Reminded me of some movies , I’ve seen a long time ago.
Thanks for your comment.

 =  hitchy
felix nicolau
[15.Jun.07 11:54]
hitchhiking along the poetic country, fighting the tempests and gallows, sometimes you run into jewellries like this. life gets a meaning. i liked the modern suggestion of this withcraft

+ der stern
felix nicolau
[15.Jun.07 11:56]
i forgot smth

 =  Felix! I wish you a most pleasant weekend!
John Willy Kopperud
[16.Jun.07 08:13]

Thank you so much, Felix! In one of the comments to your
poem MARRAKECH you were chided for delivering such a "terrible
hippie image." That comment struck me as being pretty stupid.
My subtitle "Ancient Hippie Lore" feels like sweet revenge on your behalf.

 =  Enjoy your weekend, Monica!
John Willy Kopperud
[16.Jun.07 08:21]

Thank you for perceiving my imagery as effective! Also it's
quite nice to set off associations to movies people have seen.
Greetings from Oslo

 =  sweet revenge
felix nicolau
[18.Jun.07 15:34]
thanks for avenging me, Willy!

and i only try to keep the pace with your imagination!

 =  Oku
Edilberto González Trejos
[18.Jun.07 16:00]
The road of OKU is silence taking us higher



 =  Bashô?
John Willy Kopperud
[19.Jun.07 09:04]

Edilberto, thank you again. Are you referring to Oku no Hosomichi by the poet Bashô?

 =  More to come
John Willy Kopperud
[19.Jun.07 09:07]

Felix! Thanks again! More haikus are to come. At the moment
it is the transition of the genre to modern times and non-oriental settings that intrigue me most.

 =  Matsuo Basho
Edilberto González Trejos
[19.Jun.07 14:31]
yes Willy, it´s the book from BASHO, translated into Spanish by OCTAVIO PAZ in 1956


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