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ion amariutei
[05.Jul.07 05:44]
a little out of focus. when you deal with symbols (which are already abstractions of reality) you can't afford to be vague: black bird, curse, blessing, bribe, unsealing (!)

that big black bird crying a
curse or a blessing
ma
maybe we could escape this time
maybe the bribe is still there
at the front door

although i get
no more replies from god

 =  Ion
Adela Setti
[12.Jul.07 11:31]
thanks for your suggestions, I'll think about.
Adela




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