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 =  Bob Dylan, a legend
Heghedus Camelia
[18.Aug.07 07:15]
He said: “I see things that the others don’t see. I sense things that the others don’t sense. It’s terrifying.” And the lyric of this song is a proof in that direction. I cut a piece:

“Oh the seas will split
And the ship will hit
And the sands on the shoreline will be shaking.
Then the tide will sound
And the wind will pound
And the morning will be breaking.”

Congratulations, Willy!You have an own way, simple and expressive, to make us remember...


 =  the strong haiku I ever read...
Marius Surleac
[06.Mar.08 11:50]
And you've expressed so simple two different perspectives: one with Bob Dylan on the stage and one inside his own song's stage.
I will finish what Camelia started and which I think that is much closer to the sense of your poem:

"Then they'll raise their hands,
Sayin' we'll meet all your demands,
But we'll shout from the bow your days are numbered.
And like Pharaoh's tribe,
They'll be drownded in the tide,
And like Goliath, they'll be conquered."

A wonderful haiku, it deserves a star!!!
Cheers dear friend!

 =  So kind of you, Marius...
John Willy Kopperud
[06.Mar.08 19:13]

...to show such appreciation of my attempt to pass on
a bit of master Bob's work in few words! Cheers from Willy.

 =  Cheers Willy!
Marius Surleac
[07.Mar.08 12:28]
The pleasure is mine Willy when reading something like that!
Cheers from Marius!




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