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 =  good one!
Marius Surleac
[07.Dec.08 12:24]
Interesting, so many wishes, fervent poem, nice imagery.

Well done!

Best wishes,

 =  I second Marius' opinion...
John Willy Kopperud
[07.Dec.08 15:32]
...about this poem. Besides, I think it must be important to focus on the existential perspective here:
Days, years, aeons, come and go, while life laughs at the
word "change". The poem is packed with symbols from Indian
schools of thought. India's civilization has contributed to
culture for thousands of years and one of it's striking traits is the emphasis on the seemingly ever-lasting cycle
of life that, seen through the eyes of many of that country's thinkers never changes much.
Cheers from Willy

 =  one life is always longer than...
raj thampi
[07.Dec.08 18:01]
Dear Marius and Willy
First of all thank you both the comments. Willy, being an ordinary person throughout the moments I live, there were many times I needed to pinch myself to know I was alive, because the days were the repetitions of yester days...hence those few words. I am experiencing a dry period and I don't know how better I could thank you for your kind words.


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