= suggestion... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [29.Aug.07 09:45] |
"Only it has just started" does not mean "A început, în sfârşit"; I would suggest "it finally started". | |
= English and Romanian version are not accurate tanslations of each other | Marian C Ghilea [29.Aug.07 15:55] |
始まっただけ (Hajimatta dake) = (It) only began (accurate translation). I didn't try to translate the poem from Romanian to English. The original version I wrote was in Japanese and I did my best to get both the meaning and keep the choka metric. In order to keep the right no. of syllables in English, I've made changes from a version to another. | |