| = nope | sebastian brei [20.Nov.07 03:34] |
| the entire poem is structure close to the clichee of "love has just die in my heart", which, seems to be is already abused not only in romanian poetry, but also in english. it also seems childish to me that "i'll mourn your death for life", i mean the ideea and the expresion have and efect as if it was written to many years ago. and i want a poetry to be fresh, i want nowadays poetry, otherwise i prefer the clasics. althoh the ideea and the construct does not satisfied me, i have to say that the voice is interesting and the end surprised me in a good way. but is not enough. | |