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 =  The symmetry of spades
John Willy Kopperud
[13.Nov.07 21:15]

Mouthful of clay has already been commented. I chose this one.

A very consequent text containing some vivid(?!) pictures.
I like the way occasional rhyme has entered your stanzas.

Cheers from Willy

 =  Cheers, Tom.
Ratz Tamas
[15.Nov.07 03:40]
I think this is my second comment on your poems and I must say that it's probably your mysterious inspiration that guides me to read more of your work.
This one impresses me in the way you underline a lethargic and deadly side of religion.

 =  ratz & willy
marius dan
[17.Nov.07 16:12]
cigarette break/ thinking about death. funerals are brief moments of truth

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