| = The symmetry of spades | John Willy Kopperud [13.Nov.07 21:15] |
Mouthful of clay has already been commented. I chose this one. A very consequent text containing some vivid(?!) pictures. I like the way occasional rhyme has entered your stanzas. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Cheers, Tom. | Ratz Tamas [15.Nov.07 03:40] |
| I think this is my second comment on your poems and I must say that it's probably your mysterious inspiration that guides me to read more of your work. This one impresses me in the way you underline a lethargic and deadly side of religion. | |
| = ratz & willy | marius dan [17.Nov.07 16:12] |
| cigarette break/ thinking about death. funerals are brief moments of truth | |