| = The symmetry of spades|
John Willy Kopperud
Mouthful of clay has already been commented. I chose this one.
A very consequent text containing some vivid(?!) pictures.
I like the way occasional rhyme has entered your stanzas.
Cheers from Willy
| = Cheers, Tom.|
|I think this is my second comment on your poems and I must say that it's probably your mysterious inspiration that guides me to read more of your work.|
This one impresses me in the way you underline a lethargic and deadly side of religion.
| = ratz & willy|
|cigarette break/ thinking about death. funerals are brief moments of truth|