| = + | Ciprian Begu [28.Nov.07 19:56] |
| The ending gives the poem a high philosophical twist. It made me think of the Chinese proverb which recommends one to be humble and low as the Ocean and all the rivers will flow towards you. Congratulations! | |
| = . | dan marius [05.Dec.07 18:03] |
| liked it! I like its simplicity. | |
| = bribe your inspiration | Veronica Valeanu [03.Mar.09 13:22] |
| i remember precisely having read an old bed-time story to my 5-year old son last autumn, in a magazine for kids. it contained the same dispute but among more objects in the same room. (magazine Carticica Draga Mea, autumn 2008) nothing is changed in your poem, nothing! | |
| + A little bit of Tao... | John Willy Kopperud [03.Mar.09 14:30] |
| ...in this one, Syd! A solid table has no direct function in the writing, but makes the writing possible due to it's mere existence. Go with the flow! Cheers from Willy | |