| = Sorry, Joshua, you'll have to do better... | John Willy Kopperud [01.Jan.08 13:26] |
| ...the composition is not exactly remarkable. I fear you don't master the english language to a sufficient degree and the theme is not exactly original. I look forward to better work and better poetry in 2008. Happy New Year from Willy | |
| = you're feedback is accepted :-) | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [02.Jan.08 05:28] |
| it's not that I feel bad but what counts my piece is that the passion i set in, I don't write to impress or to show what degree in english i attained, but what i wanna show is I'm into my self expression, i write to relieve my stress, after the daily annoying circumstances, I write what ever that comes into my mind, i don't edit or correct my words or add up something that others recommend, coz I want my piece of crap to be original in a way that I figured out how i feel correctly,never to mention I'm a nursing student I study medical terms and surgical and medical diagnosis, I haven't studied english so well as much as focised as others do, i believe english is used to communicate to show how you feel on how you can express your self to the fullest as you can, i only write for others to understand how i feel it's a daily journal of my reflection, anyway thanks for your feedback its much appreciated | |
| = . | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [02.Jan.08 05:31] |
| I'm a nursing student I study medical terms, surgical and medical diagnosis, I haven't studied english so well as much as (focused) as others do, sorry for my typos I'm in a hurry I'll be late for my hospital duty.....sorry again | |