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 =  More compact...
John Willy Kopperud
[20.May.08 21:47]
..than some of your other poems and, because of that, more pleasurable to read. Luckily the theme is not unhappy love
this time, that tends to bore me because these poems come along so frequently. In this one you express an intensity
that drives the poem home.
Cheers from Willy

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