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 =  I like it!
Marius Surleac
[04.Feb.08 19:34]
Great poem, great dialogue that inflicts deep feelings for the woman you love, all mixed into a melancholy state.
True!

 =  Simplicity...
John Willy Kopperud
[04.Feb.08 20:09]

...is the key word to this one. Still I do think the mood seeps through the
framework, which is the point, I guess. Thank you very much for your generous response!

Cheers from Willy

 =  Spirits - Willy
Edilberto González Trejos
[06.Feb.08 17:14]
The spirit of Wine,
Wine "spiriting" the evening
and long after sun has set
in a cold night...

Cheers Willy for you have transmitted to me emotions and life with these verses.

SONGO

 =  When the feeling gets through...
John Willy Kopperud
[06.Feb.08 23:06]

...to the reader it really feels satisfying. Such a pleasure to hear from you in this way, compadre!

Vaya con Dios!

Willy




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