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 =  Good job Sydney!
Marius Surleac
[25.Feb.08 09:15]
Hello again Sydney! Very powerful aspects in this poem. My opinion is that you exposed the fall of World Trade Center towers, and the pain that affected all; or maybe I am wrong about my idea. But the poem truly "flows", a canopy of images: “Angel’s souls flee”,” its voice choked
by maroon smoke”,” from the ashes rising
an iron cross, upright and tall".
Very beautiful, and I think that you deserve one more star.
Hope you will get it!
Cheers from Marius!

 =  Marius might be...
John Willy Kopperud
[25.Feb.08 20:40]
...a bit beside the point. To me this seems quite like a description of an old wooden church, with the bell and everything. Am i mistaken, Sydney. Anyway, I really enjoyed this one. Powerful images. Drama.

Cheers from Willy

 =  Topic about the meaning ... anyway, it deserves to be read!
Marius Surleac
[26.Feb.08 08:54]
Indeed Willy, I never thought to this interpretation but is very possible. Now, all we have to do is to wait for Sydney's response.

 =  Thanks, you were right, Willy, it is a church!
Sydney Krivenko
[27.Feb.08 02:07]
Hi, everyone! It seems that my new email address has not been rcognized in my profile. I do not get your notifications...
so, its Please mark it down, as no one seems to control this site. Sad, really...
It is indeed an old church. Saw it in a TV film burning and could hear the aching and moaning..

 =  True...
Marius Surleac
[27.Feb.08 09:23]
Congratulations Willy!
You were right!
Good job Sydney!

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