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 =  Sound of a good haiku!
Marius Surleac
[03.Mar.08 09:38]
I like how you combine the soft ("sound of the flute"), the pleasant with the grotesque ("on his grave/chrysanthemums")
Very good job Monica!

 =  senses and beyond
An sound, a smell, a vision,
This one appeals to the senses but delves into intuition, beyond senses.

Cheers

 =  nice.
Christopher Thripp
[15.Jul.08 23:07]
i agree with both great job monica.




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