| = Sound of a good haiku! | Marius Surleac [03.Mar.08 09:38] |
| I like how you combine the soft ("sound of the flute"), the pleasant with the grotesque ("on his grave/chrysanthemums") Very good job Monica! | |
| = senses and beyond | Edilberto González Trejos [15.Jul.08 21:51] |
| An sound, a smell, a vision, This one appeals to the senses but delves into intuition, beyond senses. Cheers | |
| = nice. | Christopher Thripp [15.Jul.08 23:07] |
| i agree with both great job monica. | |