| = Sound of a good haiku!|
|I like how you combine the soft ("sound of the flute"), the pleasant with the grotesque ("on his grave/chrysanthemums")|
Very good job Monica!
| = senses and beyond|
Edilberto González Trejos
|An sound, a smell, a vision,|
This one appeals to the senses but delves into intuition, beyond senses.
| = nice.|
|i agree with both great job monica.|