| = syntax and grammar, please... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [11.Mar.08 11:03] |
| ... | |
| + lines... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [12.Mar.08 11:00] |
| Detailed minimalism of multi-level thoughts, squeezed though in the two-dimensionality of a world seemingly unknown to the many. "on my paper sleep lines about dreams..." Brilliant image... | |
| = :) | Vicleanu Mihaita [12.Mar.08 20:16] |
| Thank you for your kind words Romulus. I am glad you like it. | |
| = ...book of life | John Willy Kopperud [12.Mar.08 19:11] |
| ...som impressive metaphors here. Conratulations from Willy | |
| = Thank you Willy | Vicleanu Mihaita [12.Mar.08 20:18] |
| I'm glad you feel this away:) | |
| = greatuse of words. | Christopher Thripp [12.Mar.08 21:42] |
| great words and the use of... | |
| = Thank you Cristopher | Vicleanu Mihaita [13.Mar.08 14:40] |
| for your words | |
| = my point of view is that... | Marius Surleac [13.Mar.08 09:30] |
| ...you know how to use metaphors in a pleasant way for the reader. I see in your poem a melancholy that goes round around the each day moments, like the files in a book, so this is the book of life we all read from and feel what happens inside. Good job Mihai and congratulations! Cheers! | |
| = Thank you Marius | Vicleanu Mihaita [13.Mar.08 14:47] |
| For such kind words! I really appreciate it ! | |
| = +Book of life, sublime | Bogdan G. Marin [24.Apr.08 10:29] |
| Love it, lifts your soul with images and thoughts. Book of life, sublime you never crumble into dust and never will as while there is love to fulfill | |
| = Got to love it. | Regina Moore [15.May.08 23:43] |
| Strong, bold and intense, very you mih.. Loved reading it.... | |