| = A bit confusing... | John Willy Kopperud [01.Apr.08 20:36] |
| ...yet interesting. Please though, there are some rather annoying misspellings in this piece. Please correct them. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Thank you. | Bogdan G. Marin [08.Apr.08 20:02] |
| Thank you for you commentary. First. English is not my first language, though it is not an excuse. Second. It is not finished. Grotesque Beyond - refers to grotesque beauty - or heaven. It has multiple meanings. By the interior air hang I - it represents anxiety. etc. | |
| = indeed interesting...and nice | Marius Surleac [04.Apr.08 14:24] |
| First I think that you have to correct the misspells than you have to correct some images and ideas you've put in the end of the text. The idea is a little bit strange, though interesting and makes me think to few different images:1. First I think that the whole text is a flash presentation of a real dream, exposed like bits from a nightmare and sends the reader to find by his own the conclusion of what you wanted to say (if you have time, you can read my text "Bits"-is somethin' llike that and you'll see what I ment). 2. The second is that reading your text it was like a picture for the real world we all are part of it and the tremendously speed time passes by - again the flash presentation!!! 3. The third one takes me to the "The Wall" movie of Pink Floyd's and hope I won't go too further to say that I saw some pieces from the "1984" movie after Orwell's novel. I wait for your response about the idea, the message beyond the text... Final conclusion ... very interesting! Good job! Cheers | |