Members comments:

 =  Please...
John Willy Kopperud
[05.Apr.08 16:18]
...correct the misspelling of "rhytm." Otherwise interesting.
Cheers from Willy

 =  true andy.
Christopher Thripp
[08.Apr.08 04:21]
great job my would be correct it is for both of us.

 =  true story.
Christopher Thripp
[08.Apr.08 04:25]
If anyone is wondering why i refer to paul as andy ...............short story... we have been friends for many years...I had always called him andy it was 3-4 years ...before i found out his real name is paul.
"true story"

 =  should be a little bit revised...
Marius Surleac
[08.Apr.08 10:43]
First I think that should be corrected "rhythm" and second the number of syllables exceeds the number of a haiku. See what you can do to fix the problem.
Interesting indeed but I think that the final should be replaced to remain only first three stanzas ... it will look like a haiku and will sound better.

 =  ....
Daniela Voicu
[08.Apr.08 23:22]
great job my friend....

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