| = Good writing, fine images, but please... | John Willy Kopperud [11.Apr.08 10:26] |
| "more gentler" is not proper english. I suppose that you just write: "gentler than silk." them live in peace is likewise not proper. My suggestion: "enabling them to live in peace." Cheers from Willy | |
| = my only opinion... | Marius Surleac [11.Apr.08 10:39] |
| Willy is a little bit right but I do not understand this neo-physics you talk about, especially because I am a physicist and "let's have electrons go free" - it is quite not false because we can not let them free but after some physical methods we can take them from inside elements and from electronic clouds. If, absurdly speaking, you let them collide free, there will be no you, no me, no life, no Universe, nothing. No, I am not comfortable with the idea. There is no such thing! My opinion, sorry! | |
| = As a matter of fact... | John Willy Kopperud [11.Apr.08 12:04] |
| ...I did not consider the above-mentioned that you point out, Marius,since I'm not educated in physics. These facts considered I do see that you have a point here. Poets should possess some elementary knowledge about phenomena they are describing! Cheers from Willy | |
| = perfectly right... | Marius Surleac [11.Apr.08 12:15] |
| … sure they do Willy, because what would be if we'll describe nonsense. Cheers from Marius! | |
| = I will never do it. | Christopher Thripp [12.Apr.08 05:37] |
| remind me...To never write a poem about physics. | |