| = beautiful poem...|
|Interesting indeed, good poem!|
Very expressive the atmosphere beyond the "painting" described like a short history, then the time that stops to express something different from the describing of the first part, changing the view from a distant point to a closer one that is the basic idea of the whole text.
So, that's why this poem is looks like an "autistic" poem.
Finally, the idea of the pork that saves a human person with the kidney is a real one, because pork is the most appropriate being to human when we talk about the inner vital organs.
A beautiful poem!
Cheers from Marius!
|+ Pig Power!|
John Willy Kopperud
An intriguing point of view!
Cheers from Willy
| = Marius, Willy|
|thanks guys, i'm aware it might cause consternation, just like autism, which seems to deal much better with wide spread patterns than linear logic|
| = ..............|
|Rich in texture, depth of meanings.|
| = cheers|
|brilliant work... enjoyed the thought you put into this one.|
| = thanks Daniel, Christopher|
|thanks for your kind words|