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 =  beautiful poem...
Marius Surleac
[14.Apr.08 09:12]
Interesting indeed, good poem!
Very expressive the atmosphere beyond the "painting" described like a short history, then the time that stops to express something different from the describing of the first part, changing the view from a distant point to a closer one that is the basic idea of the whole text.
So, that's why this poem is looks like an "autistic" poem.
Finally, the idea of the pork that saves a human person with the kidney is a real one, because pork is the most appropriate being to human when we talk about the inner vital organs.
A beautiful poem!
Cheers from Marius!

+ Pig Power!
John Willy Kopperud
[15.Apr.08 17:20]

An intriguing point of view!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Marius, Willy
ion a
[15.Apr.08 18:43]
thanks guys, i'm aware it might cause consternation, just like autism, which seems to deal much better with wide spread patterns than linear logic

 =  ..............
Daniel Lacatus
[16.Apr.08 15:47]
Rich in texture, depth of meanings.


 =  cheers
Christopher Thripp
[19.Apr.08 05:50]
brilliant work... enjoyed the thought you put into this one.

 =  thanks Daniel, Christopher
ion a
[19.Apr.08 08:59]
thanks for your kind words

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