| = Me, I just love Pinocchio... | John Willy Kopperud [22.Apr.08 23:27] |
| ...and this leaves me with approximately the same impression as if God had died. To Pinocchio Gepetto was, in fact, God. Enjoyed the piece. Cheers from Willy | |
| = wonderful, wonderful!!! | Marius Surleac [23.Apr.08 14:38] |
| Wonderful text! Very expressive and impressionist prose, the images described are wonderful and are tied step by step by the sad ceremonial of death. The narration is elegant and shows perfectly the inner feelings of Pinocchio, left alone in front of a long road he has to follow without his life companion Gepetto. I like the way how you've expressed Pinocchio’s thoughts, how you've took to the edge the limits of a wooden puppet (Ex: "I couldn't cry for I had no tear channels" - you had this in mind, this obstacle). Congratulations Claudia! | |
| = wonderful, wonderful!!! | Marius Surleac [23.Apr.08 10:17] |
| Wonderful text! Very expressive and impressionist prose, the images described are wonderful and are tied step by step by the sad ceremonial of death. The narration is elegant and shows perfectly the inner feelings of Pinocchio, left alone in front of a long road he has to follow without his life companion Gepetto. I like the way how you've expressed Pinocchio’s thoughts, how you've took to the edge the limits of a wooden puppet (Ex: "I couldn't cry for I had no tear channels" - you had this in mind, this obstacle). Congratulations Claudia! | |
| + Concise, elegant, beautiful... | Marius Surleac [24.Apr.08 11:48] |
| So as I said before, this is a wonderful prose, the text is concise and written with style, the images created also. Very animated and I think that the whole substance of the text deserves a star and keep going because you're on the right way. Marius! | |