| = I like | Mike Aspros [29.Apr.08 20:15] |
| your poem but not grief ;-) Good description and very complete cycle meaning rocks as grief, forming a tunnel that inevitable swallow you up. Good description of emotion, and there is hope with every tunnel opening on the other side. | |
| = cheers | Christopher Thripp [01.May.08 18:08] |
| rock solid poem ...could of been a good haiku... | |
| = black hole | Veronica Valeanu [08.Mar.09 15:41] |
| no surface, no individual shape, nothing but density, absorbtion ...a matrix! even the state of mind slides within. congratulations. veronica | |
| + Clear, concise... | John Willy Kopperud [08.Mar.09 16:45] |
| ...and expressive writing. Enjoyed it! Cheers from Willy | |
| = Extorcism | Popescu Valentin [21.Mar.09 15:45] |
| That's all it was. I thought that putting it down would set me free. And it did, sort of. | |