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 =  I like
Mike Aspros
[29.Apr.08 20:15]
your poem but not grief ;-)
Good description and very complete cycle meaning rocks as grief, forming a tunnel that inevitable swallow you up. Good description of emotion, and there is hope with every tunnel opening on the other side.

 =  cheers
Christopher Thripp
[01.May.08 18:08]
rock solid poem ...could of been a good haiku...

 =  black hole
Veronica Valeanu
[08.Mar.09 15:41]
no surface, no individual shape, nothing but density, absorbtion ...a matrix!
even the state of mind slides within.

+ Clear, concise...
John Willy Kopperud
[08.Mar.09 16:45]
...and expressive writing. Enjoyed it!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Extorcism
Popescu Valentin
[21.Mar.09 15:45]
That's all it was. I thought that putting it down would set me free. And it did, sort of.

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