| = I like|
|your poem but not grief ;-)|
Good description and very complete cycle meaning rocks as grief, forming a tunnel that inevitable swallow you up. Good description of emotion, and there is hope with every tunnel opening on the other side.
| = cheers|
|rock solid poem ...could of been a good haiku...|
| = black hole|
|no surface, no individual shape, nothing but density, absorbtion ...a matrix!|
even the state of mind slides within.
|+ Clear, concise...|
John Willy Kopperud
|...and expressive writing. Enjoyed it!|
Cheers from Willy
| = Extorcism|
|That's all it was. I thought that putting it down would set me free. And it did, sort of.|