| = rain fall would be precious | Mike Aspros [01.May.08 22:13] |
| nice use of imagery. You have good tone of revelation in your poem. You gave me picture frame moment of what you encountered. Thank you. | |
| = The reason why I put this one on the list is... | John Willy Kopperud [02.May.08 11:19] |
| ...the sheer INTENSITY of the poem. And I must add; we seem to have gotten ourselves a Romanian who handles the english language flawlessly. Lastly; this is a anique voice, with no striking resemblance to anyone else on the site, as far as I can see. Cheers from Willy | |
| = real facts for sure!!! | Marius Surleac [02.May.08 13:57] |
| Indeed Willy is right. What I see is a mixture of images with the tenderness of two hot bodies in a warm weather, all these on the stage where the rain falls and nobody actually sees it. Amongst all images that you've reflected here, rain is the main idea, because the amount of precipitations in a country as Morocco, and especially in Rabat, is very poor during the warm periods of summer, and raining with a wind speed of 11km/h is a fact that those people from Rabat truly enjoy it, is a pleasure even for the roses… Cheers from Marius and nice to see you here also Adrian! | |
| = One little add... | Adrian Gologan [03.May.08 00:19] |
| my sincere thanks for all the feedback i have become regards my modest work,now ,i don't know if i am allowed to post links on this platform,if not,than just ignore this comment,but there is also a visual thought who belongs to these words of mine,which i have created together ,here: http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs28/f/2008/092/2/e/Through_the_precious_rain_by_Vendegor.jpg there are of course no commercial intentions behind it thanks a lot again,and greetings to everybody | |
| = true... | Marius Surleac [03.May.08 00:24] |
| Indeed the image says all it has to be said. Cheers Adrian! | |
| = . | Laurentiu Ion [01.Nov.08 15:05] |
| The poem was very touching, I liked the classic flow of the poem and the urban metaphors.It really speaks! Cheers! | |