| = !!!|
|there is "tomorrow" instead of "tommorrow"|
| = something else...|
|Unicity of the moments in life, time's footprint captured by a photo, but I think that the trams can feel the final time cut!|
Cheers Paul! Expressive!
| = always cold ...|
|blackpool iluminations now you taking me back ..lol dont forget that sand beating you get..2 miles from the beach lol|
great work andy...
| = Ah, those sepia-colored frames depicting faces...|
John Willy Kopperud
|...of the departed and torn-down buildings. Blackpool, sea resort and rollercoaster for the common brit...enjoyed this!|
Cheers from Willy
| = oh, yes...|
|you capture the place and emotions, good work. I enjoyed reading your poem and then googling "Blackpool"...look like an interesting place. I like the last line, which trams have the benefit of being mechanical and always predictable. cheers!|