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 =  fascinating
Mike Aspros
[07.May.08 18:49]
good creative approach with the dueling personalities that feel like they are in a mixer. Your piece kept my attention to the end. You have a good sense for dialogue and it was convincing for me. This had good conflict, tension and resolutions. Thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed reading it.

 =  MPD...
Marius Surleac
[07.May.08 19:19]
Thank you Mike for the comment, and indeed this is a psychological disorder of particular individual’s personalities.


+ It seems clear...
John Willy Kopperud
[07.May.08 20:36]
...that you must have a knack for prose and drama, Marius!
It's intriguing the way you play with the different characters multiple personalities (or personaes) in this peace!
Cheers from Willy

 =  thank you for the twinkle star...
Marius Surleac
[07.May.08 21:08]
Thank you very much Willy for the star. I am glad that you've all liked it and I want to thank my wife also for this chance of writing the screenplay, because she is a Psychologist and that's why my passion for psychology grew higher.
Cheers Willy and thank you again!


 =  *
Laurentiu Ion
[24.Jul.09 02:23]
sometimes, a screenwriter has the opportunity or the talent of presenting(not representing) his text like an insider, like someone who took part in the action and obviously, he knows all the characters. or not, but I must say that you have it and honestly, you can use this like an advantage over others writers, or even over your limits. for sure, this screenplay will catch the public's attention, because its writing is set to a high concept - art.
well done

 =  thank you Laurentiu
Marius Surleac
[24.Jul.09 11:20]
Laurentiu, thank you very much for your more than kind words. I am glad you liked it, especially because you have a certain taste for screenplays.


 =  Excellent!
Cãtãrãu Alina - Andreea
[27.Jan.10 00:45]
Mr. Surleac, your screenplay caught my attention, starting from the title through the entire text. I'm speechless at the moment, for my words cannot depict the pleasure and the multiple feelings which rose after reading this drama. It's very interesting and I'm happy to hear that your wife helped you with this project.I'm a beginner in this domain (psychology that is) and writings relatev to it atract me like a magnet. I must say that your screenplay reminds me of a film which I have seen a year or two ago. I cannot remember its title, but it was something about a young girl named Sybille, who had multiple personalities.


 =  thank you Alina
Marius Surleac
[28.Jan.10 21:30]
Alina, I'm glad to find that you liked my text and you have a taste for psychoanalysis. I don't know about the film ... I'm interested on seeing it. You made me curious.

Best wishes,

 =  More information
Cãtãrãu Alina - Andreea
[28.Jan.10 22:25]
I found two variants of this film: one made in 1976 and one in 2007. It's simply called "Sybil" and it's the story of a young woman whose abusive childhood results in her developing a multiple personality disorder. she had 13 different personalities of different and and genders.

Cheers from Alina!

 =  .
Marius Surleac
[31.Jan.10 19:27]
Thank you Alina. I'll search for it so hope I'll see it soon.


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