| = great words | Christopher Thripp [15.May.08 03:36] |
| welcome ..great words look forward to more from you... | |
| = the poem | Mike Aspros [15.May.08 07:49] |
| is like a prayer to someone special...I so much enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing this. best, mike | |
| + a twinkle star for a whispered poem... | Marius Surleac [17.May.08 11:05] |
| Welcome new member! Here is more than images but true feelings, sensations reach their highest level around the whole area of the poem; you bind together the imagery with the metaphors like “grass blade” and the personification of a snowflake. The whisper is found to be hidden under the “eye”, the “fist”, the “hair” but the musicality comes from the “footsteps”. What moved me are the last two stanzas: “Me, snow flake, return home again / Will linger in your palm…for a while” that, in my opinion, are the most representative for the title and imagery of the poem, is a real phenomenon expressed beautiful through the eyes of the writer. Congratulations! Cheers from Marius | |
| = Christopher Tripp, Mike Aspros, Marius Surleac | Glodean Elena [18.May.08 18:39] |
| Thank you very much for you estimations! | |
| = Let me welcome you to the site, too, and... | John Willy Kopperud [18.May.08 18:50] |
| ...the poem contains real beauty, there is just one flaw I have to point out. - snowed balls? I suspect you want to say snowballs. Cheers from Willy | |
| = yes!! | Lynn West [20.May.08 07:25] |
| Excellent! | |