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 =  Again; Marius, not really a Haiku...
John Willy Kopperud
[18.May.08 01:09] a classical sense and the clarity and images don't reach the same level as in the other one I just commented. I hope you don't mind me suggesting another solution:

Love down below

Deep down underneath
a seahorse is the servant
for his tiny ones.

Cheers from Willy

 =  new improvement, thanks Willy...
Marius Surleac
[18.May.08 11:38]
Thank you Willy for your feedback and truly your suggestion is more soft and agreeable than mine. Cheers and thank you once again.
Have a nice day!

 =  It's a pleasure...
John Willy Kopperud
[18.May.08 12:28] be of use, Marius! I just wonder about the sweetness of
this one; is that okay?

Cheers from Willy

 =  absolutely...
Marius Surleac
[18.May.08 18:37]
It is absolutely ok Willy!
Cheers my friend!

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