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 =  As far as I know the Haiku set of rules...
John Willy Kopperud
[18.May.08 00:56]
...this isn't really a haiku, mainly because of the use of verbs. To me that is less essential than the fact that it's a real good short poem with original, striking images.
Welcome back from your trip, Marius!
Cheers from Willy

 =  thanks for the advice Willy...
Marius Surleac
[18.May.08 11:32]
Thank you Willy and I see what you mean. Now there is no haiku, but a short poem. Thank you very much for the advice.
Cheers from Marius, and thanks for the welcoming!

 =  Cheers, Marius...
John Willy Kopperud
[18.May.08 12:31]
...and the short poem, within a compact frame, offers quite a
few possibilities for the keen poet, such as yourself.

 =  thanks...
Marius Surleac
[18.May.08 18:38]
Thank you once again Willy for the beautiful words. Cheers!

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