| = As far as I know the Haiku set of rules... | John Willy Kopperud [18.May.08 00:56] |
| ...this isn't really a haiku, mainly because of the use of verbs. To me that is less essential than the fact that it's a real good short poem with original, striking images. Welcome back from your trip, Marius! Cheers from Willy | |
| = thanks for the advice Willy... | Marius Surleac [18.May.08 11:32] |
| Thank you Willy and I see what you mean. Now there is no haiku, but a short poem. Thank you very much for the advice. Cheers from Marius, and thanks for the welcoming! | |
| = Cheers, Marius... | John Willy Kopperud [18.May.08 12:31] |
| ...and the short poem, within a compact frame, offers quite a few possibilities for the keen poet, such as yourself. Willy | |
| = thanks... | Marius Surleac [18.May.08 18:38] |
| Thank you once again Willy for the beautiful words. Cheers! | |