| = Interesting biblical allusions... | John Willy Kopperud [19.May.08 09:32] |
| ...here. John the baptizer? One of the prophets in the old testament? Personally I think the piece might have profited by making it a bit longer and richer as a tale. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Who am I? I am just a body.... | Bogdan G. Marin [19.May.08 11:31] |
| How could your tongue spread the names of such great saints? when now I have to name my name? I am just a body - in the desert rotten. My words were these, my words in pain. It is not a tale of fiction, it is a reality. Though, I am glad you enjoyed it Willy. | |
| = I thank God for the fact that one text may... | John Willy Kopperud [19.May.08 12:02] |
| ...offer various interpretations. An aspect of life as you've experienced it? Then I must congratulate you on your choice of images. Nevertheless I do think your piece would profit by being quite a bit more elaborated. Cheers from Willy | |
| = ... | Bogdan G. Marin [19.May.08 12:23] |
| "I thank God for the fact that one text may offer various interpretations." Prose, for me, is like poetry but in propositions. "your piece would profit by being quite a bit more elaborated." Yes, you are right. Today I will add some more details to the text. | |